Re: Another poem for the melting pot of literary garbage

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:29 pm

Date: 1/2/98 3:29 PM Pacific Daylight Time
From: LdyAja

::sighs:: Do him and Seraph get together at night to figure new ways to annoy everyone?They aren't happy with their lives so they set out to make pests of themselves. Rubbish, absolute rubbish. ::post up a short note for his eyes to feast on::Burn in hell, eh? You First.

~Lady Aja Bird Dragonbane~ ~Dueler of the DoS~ ~General Misfit~

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:29 pm

Date: 1/2/98 3:39 PM Pacific Daylight Time
From: QuickVarMG

Aww, come on! Do I have to burn in hell again? Well, at least take care ::Gets a little satchel, dresses like a lawyer:: Okay, I think I have the last uniform I had to wear, on...::DIdn't really care for "New"s poem, but guess that the meaning is what counts::

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:30 pm

Date: 1/2/98 3:57 PM Pacific Daylight Time
From: Karnafexx

At least he was right about that little piece being literary garbage.

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:30 pm

Date: 1/2/98 4:21 PM Pacific Daylight Time
From: LexiGirl1

::eads this new poem:: Hell eh? Lived though it before, why not again. ::shrugs:: Silly people. ::chuckles and looks at the other posts::

Lexi

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:30 pm

Date: 1/2/98 4:12 PM Pacific Daylight Time
From: Ravyn Song

The flame grows,it's kiss delight,and of unbridledevil perverse,But don't fear wrath,nor feign rage,for on one path,You're in my cage.Meet your Doom, New!

Rayvn Song~ Bard~

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:31 pm

Date: 1/2/98 7:55 PM Pacific Daylight Time
From: Zaradda

::noting Ravyn added her poem to the melting pot of literary garbage; or he would have, had he been alive::

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:31 pm

Date: 1/2/98 7:56 PM Pacific Daylight Time
From: LdyAja

GO RAYVN!!!

~Lady Aja Bird Dragonbane~ ~Dueler of the DoS~ ~General Misfit~

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:31 pm

Date: 1/3/98 11:39 AM Pacific Daylight Time
From: Miss LiIy

::looks at Perri's and posts a little post-it::Thank you Perri! I didn't want to bring it up, but that poem that New wrote was for us to "enjoy". If you read the poem through and ignore that last line, you'll see it's not that bad of poetry. And New...we all will rott there someday I presume.

~Lily Lesprit~

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:33 pm

Date: 1/3/98 1:45 PM Pacific Daylight Time
From: Quan Fei

::pounds up to the boards and makes a face to the message of Perri's::Perri, He wrote badly about DoS. His poem was written bad about the Duel of Swords. But hey I guess we can overlook that right? Poetry comes from deep with in, and should be expressed in a atmost personal and mature manor. He wrote that intentionly on getting some attention, there-for it offended alot of people in DoS, and we all have our opinion on things, and not all poems are to be liked, every poem is up for criticism.Warlord Zhange Fei

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:33 pm

Date: 1/3/98 3:13 PM Pacific Daylight Time
From: PrlUnicorn

>>He wrote badly about DoS. <<Not quite Zhange.. the poem itself was ok..not badly written.. I believe it's the subject matter that's in question. ::shrugs:: However as been pointed out.. all entitled to an opinion.

Colleen MacLeodQueuekeeper of DoS

DoS Archive · Post by **DoS Archive** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:33 pm

Date: 1/6/98 10:23 PM Pacific Daylight Time
From: Duke UzieI

Blah

Next argument please.